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RankuzaLv24yr
2020-08-23 19:32

This book is really good, the writing style has brilliantly laid the worlds background and the main character in place. I also like the plot. However, I do find the paragraphs to be too long, it would be good if you can separate them into smaller paragraphs overall I really love the story and highly recommend it. Keep writing author.😁

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This is a true novel in the making. One of the deepest and realest world setting, character building here in WN. With a steady pace & good grasp of illustration the author sets near perfect plotline for an exciting historical adventure.! I loved it. A worthy addition to my library. ! Looking forward to more chapters, although I am on the 3rd one .. Hehe

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It is well written with a good storyline. The proofreaders are also doing a great job. Its a good read if your looking for a fantasy novel with a lot of new ideas.

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I am not a fan of fantasy stories but I love this so much. The story is very interesting and keeps you yearning for more. Can't wait to read future updates. Thumbs up.

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Dope. Keep it coming. I hope you will write more chapters. Nicely put and organized. Work on adding pictures or maybe you had them but my phone couldn’t load them.

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I have nothing but praise for this work. First of all, I love that introductory chapter. It baited me right off the bat. I love the excellent use of words that just flow out seemingly, giving me a pleasant reading experience, without the grammar pet-peeves. Moreover, it really gives a vivid imagery of what's happening. So 11/10 for that impressive construction. For the characters, I love how they are described. There seems to be an air of mystery surrounding them - Eric and Jayne. I can feel it, this novel will bring us to a new perspective, and these characters will be caught up in a way they didn't think their fates could. I've only read 5 chapters so far, but I'm absolutely positive about this, so I'll rate a perfect score now. I added this to my library. If you're looking for an excellent prose, this one is for you.

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Nice and very interesting novel. I liked it's story development and character design. Please keep it up dear author. Make sure for regular updates 😉😊

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