Review Detail of Jackal_Zirson in Harry Potter and The Lost One

(Read entire rate) I am giving this story a five star review despite my several issues with it.The reason i am doing that is because i see great potential in it despite its shortcomings. if your main language is english, i would not recommend reading this novel until the author gets an editor, the reason being is that reading through this story was so unbelievably annoying (Reason being the grammar and wording) that i stopped at chapter 3, i tried editing it through comments on the fly, but it became far too annoying (because i couldnt just write corrections in, i had to comment them, which made it several times more difficult to edit long paragraphs) so unless i am personally asked to edit it by the author i wont be doing so. as for the story? its great, so if you dont mind the writing give it a go!