Review Detail of Kopy in Path of Supreme Being (PAUSE)

READ THIS FIRST BEFORE READING MY NOVEL!!! This will be my honest review (AGAIN) If you want to read this novel, expect some mess in spelling, grammar, and sentence structure. I know little about English because it's my SECOND language, I'm trying my best to put up the word, to describe it as much as I can. You can read it till the end or you can leave. I'm writing this story because I want to, I want to share my OWN stories, I'll try my best to make the chapters readable and better :D I will try to improve myself so thank you for the support :D So if you find some wrong grammar sentences for the time being while I still not fixing it.. Deal with it! xD