Review Detail of xiaohai_23 in Abandoned Empress [BL] DISCONTINUED

I've read the chapters available so far. I'll say that I am no fan of BL, but I don't rule them out of my reading just because of that. However, everything sounds new to me for this reason. The main character is, as for the title, an abandoned Empress. The story starts with a huge spoiler that tells you how is it going to end, and then it jumps back to how it started. It's an interesting choice, and it doesn't happen often here on webnovel. I actually liked it. The ML is a total jerk (which is fine for a fictional character, this is a constatation and not critics; we all like villains, don't we?). I can't understand the change he had 'overnight'. He's either incoherent, or something happened during the jouney... But it doesn't change the fact that he souldn't treat the MC like that. The only suggestion I can give you is to try improving the grammar, the rest is super!