Review Detail of haakuman in Yin & Yang Pleasures of Cultivation
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Can’t read this. Every character so far has such an annoying, snarky way of speech. They’re all radiating nauseating amounts sacarsm and I cringe at every conversation. I don’t really get how someone can enjoy this but we all have different tastes I guess.
Yin & Yang Pleasures of Cultivation
CosmicPrime
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I see. Well I'm only just a bit confused at every character has an annoying snarky way of talking and they're all constantly sarcastic. Mainly because, Aniela, the FMC, is in no way snarky or sarcastic. While her energetic, bubbly personality can be annoying, she's rarely openly rude unless she gets provoke first. Darcel fits in being snarky and sarcastic. But, even then his personality does begin to shift to be more charismatic later on in the story. As for the rest of the characters, I'm not sure how far you read but most foes only have a few dialogues with the MCs before they're eventually defeated. I mean characters like the opening instructor at the Academy, Teacher Zala, Vice Principal Zelle, Hao Cao, and the other friends of the MCs aren't really sarcastic at all. Sometimes they banter but I wouldn't call it sarcasm. Well, I just wanted to know why you think everybody is sarcastic then.
Ive read until ch7. Couldn’t continue from there. Not every character is like that but the MC and at least a few others are, and of couse being the MC means he has to talk a lot of the time. Either way I dislike it for his way of speech. It gives me the impression that he’s childish.
CosmicPrime:I see. Well I'm only just a bit confused at every character has an annoying snarky way of talking and they're all constantly sarcastic. Mainly because, Aniela, the FMC, is in no way snarky or sarcastic. While her energetic, bubbly personality can be annoying, she's rarely openly rude unless she gets provoke first. Darcel fits in being snarky and sarcastic. But, even then his personality does begin to shift to be more charismatic later on in the story. As for the rest of the characters, I'm not sure how far you read but most foes only have a few dialogues with the MCs before they're eventually defeated. I mean characters like the opening instructor at the Academy, Teacher Zala, Vice Principal Zelle, Hao Cao, and the other friends of the MCs aren't really sarcastic at all. Sometimes they banter but I wouldn't call it sarcasm. Well, I just wanted to know why you think everybody is sarcastic then.
I see, well that's fair. I'll just say that because of the MC kidnapped upbringing, he never really had a guide or some sort of figure in his life that can teach him lessons or go out and gain actual experiences in the real world. Which is he's rough around the edges for the start and can be quite childish. But still, I can admit there are plenty of other better ways I could've written his personality and to make him more bearable and enjoyable to read while also keeping in mind his childhood. This was really helpful to think about and go over.
haakuman:Ive read until ch7. Couldn’t continue from there. Not every character is like that but the MC and at least a few others are, and of couse being the MC means he has to talk a lot of the time. Either way I dislike it for his way of speech. It gives me the impression that he’s childish.
Well, as I said people have different tastes and there are people who like your story. I’ll be stopping here but you can keep doin ur thing. Peace ✌️
CosmicPrime:I see, well that's fair. I'll just say that because of the MC kidnapped upbringing, he never really had a guide or some sort of figure in his life that can teach him lessons or go out and gain actual experiences in the real world. Which is he's rough around the edges for the start and can be quite childish. But still, I can admit there are plenty of other better ways I could've written his personality and to make him more bearable and enjoyable to read while also keeping in mind his childhood. This was really helpful to think about and go over.
