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Honestly it's all over the place. Im not an author and I dont think I can write something that can become popular. but I mean, no offence, but even I can write better than this. what Im trying to say is there are so many holes in this story. too little important information here, too much useless information there, stuff like that. and I feel 90% of the characters are changed, their personalities aren't as concrete as I remember.