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skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv133yrskulputulurubug

The characters are hollow you didn't capture any of their personalities, nobody is curious or cunning. Mc does whatever he wants and no one reacts. I applaud you for having the ability to write as many words as you have without a concrete story. Aside from mc no one has a soul it's boring.

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LordRavenclaw
LordRavenclawLv13LordRavenclaw

I mean it did say that the story won't have deep characters in the synopsis.

Duck_11
Duck_11Lv13Duck_11

I guess you didn't read the synopsis