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JosePascua
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What I'll say first is ... the fanfic is good. Why? - Well, I'll tell you the 3 wishes the way I read it. 1.-The MC wanted to have a [System] like in any other fanfic, except that he asked God that said system did not have the mission / quest function. 2.- Here the MC asked God to grant him [Creation Magic] (he cannot create 'life' but he can create many other things, I want you to understand this is creation magic, it focuses specifically on 'Create', and not in giving into existence what one imagines as the arc of embodiment, it also has to have enough energy for what it creates. 3.- Here the MC wished the library of the path of heaven with all the knowledge of the multiverse (I hope you understand that he did not ask for a golden finger and then you're go on saying that why he does not use something that he does not even have, ok?). And finally, since the MC was in the form of a soul and God had to create his body to transport him to the world, the MC asked him as a request (after all, he spent his wishes) to make him handsome as a 'Cadis Etrama Of Raizel Noblesse'. Here image: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/ec/1e/ca/ec1eca68d6272684c1394fa2336f3a41.jpg

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