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warning....this is basically wish fulfillment [tag is not there right now ] MC is a retard. This dude has a modified OP library of heavens path, the power of creation [complete one] and a system with a store....he wastes a wish on looking good. so yah. And seeing as this is danmanchi I think it might be weird, especially with the retard MC. the chicks all wet themselves, character interactions are plot forced and bland, MC has no purpose not a review, just a friendly warning? Author ur interactions....if forced, this ruins ur bk author man, work on it and take it slow, GL..