Idk why this novel haven't entered the top rating but its definitely underrated and I like the author is meticulous to detail like giving yoshinon different forms while the characters feels like a characters not an AI yes man. Still reading to catch up with the latest update so I might edit this later.
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I don’t know why I’m dissing my own novel, but here are some reasons why: 1) Cause most people don’t like Eri as Waifu, and only see her as daughter material. 2) the story pacing is a bit slow for some people at the beginning, so it stops people from reading further where the plot quickens 3) the mc is a child younger than the canon members, and not many people enjoys a child mc 4) the mha part follows canon, and as a teacher, the mc do have little part to play in school events, though I try my best to include them as much as possible 5) though I do write meticulous details, some people do find those redundant or too much details, pushing them from reading any further 6) though many people do read this novel, majority of them don’t vote for it, hence the low rankings
Update to my review: Its still quite good but the problem is your sticking too much to the canon with some changes. Since he became quite influential there should be a bigger changes like izuku, he should intern to a different hero since he already trained with gran torino during 1 year training so theres a few things to learn from him. While USJ incident shouldn't happen since he stop tomura gathering info for the schedule of allmight during the press trespassing incident. Your pacing is quite good I rate it to 5 not too long not too short I dont like it when some author just summarize some important incident, your choice for love interest is also interesting since hes almost immortal the only character here that can stay with him till the end is eri, while your update schedule is daily so I rate it to 5. Also answering some of your author note at the end of the chapters rip beehive gang, while this is my recommendation for anime if you enjoy darling in franx. Anohana, Angel beats and guilty crown(after watching guilty crown search for ending explanation in google since the ending is misleading) Goodluck on your writing. :)
Yes. I do realize that as well. Honestly, anything that is not Shido I find it too lazy to change.
