A great beginning, a good plot, and an uncertain end. This feels like a one-shot, but it's not, and I don't know what to think about it. The only thing I can say that this story didn't leave a good taste in my mouth after reading, so I'm being objective with the stars. The writing quality isn't the best, but the characters, well, the ones left, are good. World background is solid too, so that's a good start. Keep this up, I think people would like to read it.
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