Review Detail of tommy_king in Adapting to the Multiverse
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Its a Star Wars fan-fic with possable universe travel. the tags i would add are [strong] [op] [male mc] [multiverse travel] [star wars] Definitely worth a read as it is very good I was pleasantly suprised at the prolog before the main story started, it was definitely one of the better ones i’ve read on this site. The story itself is really good and im hoping we can get a chapter where he hunts something thought Impossible and proves his worth I like where to story is going and even if i dontt agree with mc at part i can understand where he is coming from. i also hope that he becomes the arena champion for Asajj Ventress and then the 2 of them take control of his species and stop the males being seen as slaves or just leav the world. My only real problem with the story is i dont know what his goal is. you’ve talked about the people who sent earth of the future into the void so i is as thinking that they are his end hoal bit there really isnt a connection between mc and the future earth so i dont know what his goals are. 🤷🏻♂️ other than that everything else is amazing and i want more chapters. also if mc just wants to live a new life without dealing with the other people plz make Asajj Ventress his wife, cool badass assassin wife. im looking forward for more content. thx
Adapting to the Multiverse
Adramelech
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I'll try to add those tags if I figure out how to, but you're right about the goal as in that the mc has no connection to the future events of his world and that It was his world's own fault since they went out of their way to invade and conquer other people's home worlds and kill most if not all of it's natural inhabitants on their war. As for the mc personal goal, he doesn't really have one at the moment besides just experiencing every world and obtaining stuff from them. As his wish from even his first life has always been to have the stuff from fiction become real and now that he has the chance and ability to have them be real for him, he's trying to go and experience those worlds himself.
Thank you for clearing up the misunderstanding. the m enjoying the novel and just wait for another chapter
Adramelech:I'll try to add those tags if I figure out how to, but you're right about the goal as in that the mc has no connection to the future events of his world and that It was his world's own fault since they went out of their way to invade and conquer other people's home worlds and kill most if not all of it's natural inhabitants on their war. As for the mc personal goal, he doesn't really have one at the moment besides just experiencing every world and obtaining stuff from them. As his wish from even his first life has always been to have the stuff from fiction become real and now that he has the chance and ability to have them be real for him, he's trying to go and experience those worlds himself.
by the way I looked up on Ventress, but I honestly can't pair her up with the mc otherwise there would be no way to better the Nightbrothers' lives. Have you seen what she did to Savage and Feral? She completely treats the as easily disposable slaves with no empathy or remorse. So while she may be a cool character I can't follow that path. plus I really don't want to cross Talzin's path and have the mc become a puppet.
tommy_king:Thank you for clearing up the misunderstanding. the m enjoying the novel and just wait for another chapter
Cool cool np. tbh i didn’t really look deeply into her character so if she doesn’t fit, she doesn’t fit. Just get another badass female character
Adramelech:by the way I looked up on Ventress, but I honestly can't pair her up with the mc otherwise there would be no way to better the Nightbrothers' lives. Have you seen what she did to Savage and Feral? She completely treats the as easily disposable slaves with no empathy or remorse. So while she may be a cool character I can't follow that path. plus I really don't want to cross Talzin's path and have the mc become a puppet.
If you have any suggestions I'm all ears. I'm pretty much learning as I go here. I have so many tabs open on my computer, just to get the necessary info I need to complete this one planet, I haven't even gotten to another planet, let alone the entire star wars universe and timeline
tommy_king:Cool cool np. tbh i didn’t really look deeply into her character so if she doesn’t fit, she doesn’t fit. Just get another badass female character
Adramelech:by the way I looked up on Ventress, but I honestly can't pair her up with the mc otherwise there would be no way to better the Nightbrothers' lives. Have you seen what she did to Savage and Feral? She completely treats the as easily disposable slaves with no empathy or remorse. So while she may be a cool character I can't follow that path. plus I really don't want to cross Talzin's path and have the mc become a puppet.