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Glenstonx
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How come this one does not have any ratings yet? Anyway since I got to review first. I noticed some errors in your writing such as uses of comma and spaces between them, and also some dialogues. I hope you improve more, your story seems to be in the right track! keep going author

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The Right King

Sassywoman28

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Glenstonx
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HI sorry for the late reply, of course. Please look for my book "Surrender to grief" reach me out in email: kishairish9251@gmail.com discord: meep tortol#5145 i would recommend you to reach me out in discord, in that way I can introduce you to other authors! Have a nice day

Sassywoman28
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Thank you so , so much. Yes , you are right. There ' are ' alot of comma spilce in my book and when you reach later on in the story , I have erased alot of those grammatical mistakes. I've wrote this book in my teenage , high school years and currently , I'm writing '' The Right King : 2 '' so I have had much time to correct the errors until writing on web novels right now. Thank you , thank you , thank you so much for commmenting and reading my book. I very much appreciate it so much. I rarely get comments on my work. All I get is reads and voting my chapters , in which I'm grateful for , but if I'm going to be a better , more professional and serious writer/or author , I need alot of comments.

Sassywoman28
Sassywoman28AuthorSassywoman28

Please , please , please .. keep commenting my book. I could use all of the constructive criticism that I can get. You're the first person to reach out on to me on my book , when I first writing web novel.com. I'm a new member here and I just joined this year.

Glenstonx
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I'll look more into it and give you reviews soon! please wait for me to review yours <3

Sassywoman28
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Do you think that you can please help me promote my book ? How do I do that ? - Oh , and don't u worry about the commas. Thanks for taking notice. I put those commas there for a reason , so they don't need to be gotten rid of. I tagged my work like u said. Perhaps I should enter both of my books into a writing contest. I've never participated in a writing contest before , so this'll be my very first time.

Sassywoman28
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I'll think about changing the book cover though. I don't know when I'll do this ...

Glenstonx
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you will have to review swap with other authors, to promote your book as well as get readers and reviews. Promote your book to other social medias too.

Sassywoman28:Do you think that you can please help me promote my book ? How do I do that ? - Oh , and don't u worry about the commas. Thanks for taking notice. I put those commas there for a reason , so they don't need to be gotten rid of. I tagged my work like u said. Perhaps I should enter both of my books into a writing contest. I've never participated in a writing contest before , so this'll be my very first time.
Sassywoman28
Sassywoman28AuthorSassywoman28

Hi. Could you help me ? I do I review swap with other authors ? Know any popular authors that I could speak with and read their work ? , anything to get my book promoted out here on Webnovels.com. How do I get ratings ?

Glenstonx:you will have to review swap with other authors, to promote your book as well as get readers and reviews. Promote your book to other social medias too.
Sassywoman28
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I'll re edit my writing and do everything I can to be better. Could we please get in contact and talk more about this ? I'd love to take your advice , get a new book cover and transform my books. I write on another website , so it's hard bouncin' back from here .. all the way to another writing website. But I'm getting better as an online , serious , professional and consistent writing. I'm getting better.

Sassywoman28
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Could we talk more often ? I need your writing advice and constructive criticism.

Sassywoman28
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I've already promoted my book and used social media to spread the word about my book. the only reason why my book doesn't have enough ratings ... is because it's a very long book of mature content , that's why.

Sassywoman28
Sassywoman28AuthorSassywoman28

Hey , the grammar and punctuation is fine. I kept it that way for a reason. However .I am rewritingg and remaking my very first book. Meaning I'll rewrite and remake it twice , change the plot and chapters of my book and all of that wonderful stuff.