THIS story isn't my cup of tea but i'm impressed. it's nice and the English is good. Some parts made me laugh. Though i can't promise to keep reading this, il keave it in my library and recommend to my readers. but please don't mind me. Keep writing, my dear. You got talent. I'm a binge reader, so probably one day I'll just binge read the rest chapters. thanks for your effort and don't give up no matter what others say. Even if they tell you your story is trash (I've been told that before) don't drop the story. Instead go for a competition with the badmouthed reader (so far the person who did that didn't reply). one day, a contract will land in your hands trust me.
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