The novel is well written but the mc's change happens to quickly without any trigger The world building could be better explored it feels like a waste not to The mc's personality is indistinct , when he changes like a chameleon forcing the reader to ask what? and how? over every 3-4 chapters Ps: some chapters could be combined for more fluidity like when fights take entire chapters
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