Review Detail of nightmaregard in My (Monster?) Hero Life
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honestly the start of the story is good. it had potential with well described characters, interesting back ground and diverse ways of telling things. this ends after you need to pay to view. it does not one but two or three time skips while there were event that could and did at points transpire ruining the pacing and growth of the MC. at that point started to loose interest and then the pacing gets quicker less story is actually told. the main people are killed off with out a second thought with very little reason to do so, with varrrry little interaction before the next time skip as though they never were there.
My (Monster?) Hero Life
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sorry about the lateness of the reply, my notifications have not really worked except when I'm on PC, which I'm not usually on. I don't have a problem with the brakes and the constant action dose get on my nerves but if a brake in action happens SHOW IT and vice versa, if the hero would see this now if they would not see or know about it its up to you if you wish to show such. butt when you time skip and give some one scars and they moved half a continent doing things and this is described in a foot note fashion after a sudden time skip with no explanation it really kills it for me. you will know after chapter like 50 is where the issues are, before this is good writing.
Master_Celestial:I think time skips are needed. Or do you think just because it is a novel There must be 24/7 action without a break. Although I haven‘t read the novel yet, I’m planning to do so. And I hate these novels where event happens after events. Partly even on the same day. If you compare it with real life that‘s so unlikely. You also cannot expect that everything that happens in the world will happen around the protagonist. I mean, it could be that the author doesn‘t write breaks, like some daily slice of life now and then and just starts the next arc. That would disappoint me slightly as I cannot bear to read a book wich doesn’t even give the mc some time to rest mentally as well as physically. That aside, it could be that I misunderstood you and completely missed your point. In that case, please forgive me as I haven’t read the Book yet. Still I will read it soon and should my comment here be wrong, I will delete it or write a new one.
I think time skips are needed. Or do you think just because it is a novel There must be 24/7 action without a break. Although I haven‘t read the novel yet, I’m planning to do so. And I hate these novels where event happens after events. Partly even on the same day. If you compare it with real life that‘s so unlikely. You also cannot expect that everything that happens in the world will happen around the protagonist. I mean, it could be that the author doesn‘t write breaks, like some daily slice of life now and then and just starts the next arc. That would disappoint me slightly as I cannot bear to read a book wich doesn’t even give the mc some time to rest mentally as well as physically. That aside, it could be that I misunderstood you and completely missed your point. In that case, please forgive me as I haven’t read the Book yet. Still I will read it soon and should my comment here be wrong, I will delete it or write a new one.
nightmaregard:sorry about the lateness of the reply, my notifications have not really worked except when I'm on PC, which I'm not usually on. I don't have a problem with the brakes and the constant action dose get on my nerves but if a brake in action happens SHOW IT and vice versa, if the hero would see this now if they would not see or know about it its up to you if you wish to show such. butt when you time skip and give some one scars and they moved half a continent doing things and this is described in a foot note fashion after a sudden time skip with no explanation it really kills it for me. you will know after chapter like 50 is where the issues are, before this is good writing.