Review Detail of Drapetomaniac12 in Of Gods and Myths

Writing quality is good. The paragraphs were lengthy and detailed. Readers usually skim the paragraphs so I'd suggest that you can divide a lengthy paragraph in half and provide spacing after each para as that looks better? It's just a suggestion. I did see slight grammatical errors, mostly typos that might have been overlooked. Also, there are 2 errors in the synopsis. You should review it once. Story's pace is good. You have thoroughly researched before writing the story. That's a plus for me. There are sooooo many characters and each of them are well described. Good job! World background has been expanded quite well. I have no complaints at all. Keep writing, author!