Review Detail of Theinfamous_ln in Secrets of the Marcias Estate

OMYGOD, Okay, Author here. Please take your time to read, cause I'll be giving some honest review here. THIS BOOK IS MY FIRST NOVEL, so take note and don't expect it to be grand, but for me it is worth the read, actually I'll just advice you to read Chapters 27 and above. Okay, first the writing quality. When I first wrote this book, I was feeling so good like a pro, but honestly as I let others read it and edit it out imma give it an average of 3, cause as time passed by I get to realize there were a lot of mistakes. Story Development, Okay, I'm not gonna deny it. This was the Most challenging part. This story has A LOT of loopholes that I myself got confused as I edited the story over and over. I really tried to limit myself cause at that time, my ideas were spurting. This story is written to be a mystery, and well it is mysterious af cause even the author got herself confused! BUT hey, I would totally still advice you dear reader to give it a go (if you like confusing fcks like ur excrush, jwk). So I'm giving this one a 4. Next is Character Design, well I ****ed up in this one. Not gonna deny it, It's the main leads, yep. And I'm more pissed off with Ophelia than Icarus, seriously, She was supposed to be the strong FMC but she dissapoints me, oops sorry, I dissapointed her. But I just really went with the flow of her confused character cause she clueless af, and yep it was meant to be that way (oh yea I did it because of the twists) Imma give it a 3. Updating stability? -5 Phh, Im done with this book, its friggin completed but bruh, could have done better, But imma praise myself as "not bad for a first" But "totally not good (for me)." AND lastly, world Background, Uhm its def not confusing as the whole plot itself, Just the marcia mansion and the 4 Regions of a Single continent with some magical history (which makes up the story's confusing flow) -a 4. So basically, this is an average book but the twists of this story are worth the read and exploration. Or maybe it's just? What can I say though, I'm just a writer. And if I may, I would love to recommend my second book the Greatest Scandal of the Century. This book has class and well, I enjoyed writing it more. If you may, visit the description and read the first chapter, then maybe you might end up reading more of it. Thank you for reading this so much. Really, appreciate your time to read this. Please enjoy your reading and explore more creative books😊