Review Detail of ThyUnknownSaint in I Became a Progenitor Vampire

I don't like talking bad about writers but the Author's writing skill is not good enough to implement the Author's thoughts. It's rushed and awkward to read. It feels more like it's trying to fill the word-count instead and not even trying to make sense of it. Mages are too OP is at least was well-written, even if I didn't like the story lol. I could read it and understand what the Author tryna convey. As much as I enjoyed this novel, I can't see it picked up which sucks. I was highly optimistic about this as it's a fairly new novel. The first 60 chapters are always a lie in CNs most of the time after all and it can get better. It's awkward when he's calling farmers and beggars 'my people' when they don't even trust him. Nothing even planned. The Author is not making it believable to the Readers. (Perhaps the Author started off to BIG and should have written something simpler?)