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Robert_8633
Robert_8633Lv33yrRobert_8633

He starts off too strong and with too much and theres the fact he can go back to his old world which adds nothing to the story. It reminds me of legendary mechanic and mages are too op mised together but its not as good as either. This would have been way better if he had to make his own vampire clan but he starts off with 200 vamps under him from chap 1, the interesting things are just skipped over cuz author not skilled enough.

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I Became a Progenitor Vampire

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swordzero
swordzeroLv6swordzero

when he goes back is he human or still a vampire?

ThyUnknownSaint
ThyUnknownSaintLv10ThyUnknownSaint

You're completely right, reading this is really awkward =/

GummyOfDoom
GummyOfDoomLv4GummyOfDoom

While indeed he can switch back is a turn off. There is more to it I think. The plot is not rushed and the author put much thought into how the story progress. No obvious loophole as of yet.