Review Detail of RoadBlock92 in Super Pet Nursery
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Announcement to all my readers I have asked around and it is fine for me to write this story. However, I need to change a few things and these things may be big to the story. I will need some time to change everything so, there will be no new chapters for the next few days. I hope the changes I make will still be enjoyable for everyone. I am sorry and I hope everyone will understand me.
Super Pet Nursery
RoadBlock92
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Vishnu_R_Krishna:this is interesting,this is quite a different reason to stop writing the novel.sigh there goes another good novel to the trash bin.
I am sorry again. I make this announcement in a rush. After deeper research for the past few hours, I finally found my answer. I don't think I can continue this novel. I should have done a more detail check before I write a novel. This is my mistake and I admit it. As a Muslim, I cannot write anything that is not permissible in Islam such as Magic [Upon deeper reading, Superpowers is ok]. I also cannot write something that shows something that only Allah S.W.T can do like reviving the dead but I write it in this story where Sery can revive Lucas and the pets in the Nursery Dungeon which is a big sin. I did not realize about this before but now that I know, I cannot continue writing this story. I have trouble keeping myself calm since last Friday and now that I know my mistake, I cannot continue writing this. This is really my fault. I am disappointing everyone now and I hope everyone can forgive me. I don't think I will stop becoming an author but I will not write anything related to this kind of story. System story is too risky because the system is too powerful. I already have an idea on what I can write but I will need to settle the problem with this novel first. The contract and everything :( I am deeply sorry and apologize for everything.
BunnyEarMadman:hi author san, what happen? what makes u think that it is not okay to write the story? something happen? thank you for your hard work.
Vishnu_R_Krishna:this is interesting,this is quite a different reason to stop writing the novel.sigh there goes another good novel to the trash bin.
bro are u continuing this novel or not atleast stat that clearly bcs in this cmnt you r saying i will not write this novel , but in main comment you r saying that you r just editing it.
RoadBlock92:I am sorry again. I make this announcement in a rush. After deeper research for the past few hours, I finally found my answer. I don't think I can continue this novel. I should have done a more detail check before I write a novel. This is my mistake and I admit it. As a Muslim, I cannot write anything that is not permissible in Islam such as Magic [Upon deeper reading, Superpowers is ok]. I also cannot write something that shows something that only Allah S.W.T can do like reviving the dead but I write it in this story where Sery can revive Lucas and the pets in the Nursery Dungeon which is a big sin. I did not realize about this before but now that I know, I cannot continue writing this story. I have trouble keeping myself calm since last Friday and now that I know my mistake, I cannot continue writing this. This is really my fault. I am disappointing everyone now and I hope everyone can forgive me. I don't think I will stop becoming an author but I will not write anything related to this kind of story. System story is too risky because the system is too powerful. I already have an idea on what I can write but I will need to settle the problem with this novel first. The contract and everything :( I am deeply sorry and apologize for everything.
RoadBlock92:I am sorry again. I make this announcement in a rush. After deeper research for the past few hours, I finally found my answer. I don't think I can continue this novel. I should have done a more detail check before I write a novel. This is my mistake and I admit it. As a Muslim, I cannot write anything that is not permissible in Islam such as Magic [Upon deeper reading, Superpowers is ok]. I also cannot write something that shows something that only Allah S.W.T can do like reviving the dead but I write it in this story where Sery can revive Lucas and the pets in the Nursery Dungeon which is a big sin. I did not realize about this before but now that I know, I cannot continue writing this story. I have trouble keeping myself calm since last Friday and now that I know my mistake, I cannot continue writing this. This is really my fault. I am disappointing everyone now and I hope everyone can forgive me. I don't think I will stop becoming an author but I will not write anything related to this kind of story. System story is too risky because the system is too powerful. I already have an idea on what I can write but I will need to settle the problem with this novel first. The contract and everything :( I am deeply sorry and apologize for everything.
You are already treating the nursery dungeons as simulated spaces like a vrmmo. This is why treasures and monsters can respawn. If you alter the story to where they don't have to physically enter the dungeons (their bodies could be in a separate space which mimics the movement of their avatars so they do get real physical training minus the real danger) then they wouldn't be getting revived as much as their avatars are respawning. This could even be offered as a service for customers way down the road.
it also seems like the magic for the most part could be described as advanced technology or a different understanding about how space and time works.
Lumen214:You are already treating the nursery dungeons as simulated spaces like a vrmmo. This is why treasures and monsters can respawn. If you alter the story to where they don't have to physically enter the dungeons (their bodies could be in a separate space which mimics the movement of their avatars so they do get real physical training minus the real danger) then they wouldn't be getting revived as much as their avatars are respawning. This could even be offered as a service for customers way down the road.
So you let religion limit your imagination and free will and force yourself to be a drone to ... a humans written words? Since the words in your book was written by a human at the start, might have had a "higher influence" but in the end it was still a human who wrote it down. And during the years rewritten by humans to the shape of their idea of what the original idea was. But now its copied by a machine which is the fruit of great and unfettered imagination. Sad day, it was a really good book.
RoadBlock92:I am sorry again. I make this announcement in a rush. After deeper research for the past few hours, I finally found my answer. I don't think I can continue this novel. I should have done a more detail check before I write a novel. This is my mistake and I admit it. As a Muslim, I cannot write anything that is not permissible in Islam such as Magic [Upon deeper reading, Superpowers is ok]. I also cannot write something that shows something that only Allah S.W.T can do like reviving the dead but I write it in this story where Sery can revive Lucas and the pets in the Nursery Dungeon which is a big sin. I did not realize about this before but now that I know, I cannot continue writing this story. I have trouble keeping myself calm since last Friday and now that I know my mistake, I cannot continue writing this. This is really my fault. I am disappointing everyone now and I hope everyone can forgive me. I don't think I will stop becoming an author but I will not write anything related to this kind of story. System story is too risky because the system is too powerful. I already have an idea on what I can write but I will need to settle the problem with this novel first. The contract and everything :( I am deeply sorry and apologize for everything.
For me as muslim as well. your already Write a Wonderfull story and book. It so wasted for u just leave it. U can just act as Like in Games world. The revive isues is simple when u act like in game scenario. just act and made ur imagination guide u. but in same time strongly believed to Allah as Her give us all the idea n way. dont Stop this good story. Insyaallah Allah with us.
You seem to confuse Islam with another religion. The words are documented by people yes however it is not the main way to gaurd and protect the holy book, the holy book was memorized completely by the people so it is impossible for it to be changed as there will be countless people who will note the difference.
Ormathon:So you let religion limit your imagination and free will and force yourself to be a drone to ... a humans written words? Since the words in your book was written by a human at the start, might have had a "higher influence" but in the end it was still a human who wrote it down. And during the years rewritten by humans to the shape of their idea of what the original idea was. But now its copied by a machine which is the fruit of great and unfettered imagination. Sad day, it was a really good book.
If possible, maybe think about selling the story to someone you can trust to continue it as you would have. I really dislike the idea of an actually good novel getting thrown to the side or seeing it getting ripped into shreds/gutted into a completly different story. But it’s up to you in the end, whatever you do with it, I wish you the best of luck.
RoadBlock92:I am sorry again. I make this announcement in a rush. After deeper research for the past few hours, I finally found my answer. I don't think I can continue this novel. I should have done a more detail check before I write a novel. This is my mistake and I admit it. As a Muslim, I cannot write anything that is not permissible in Islam such as Magic [Upon deeper reading, Superpowers is ok]. I also cannot write something that shows something that only Allah S.W.T can do like reviving the dead but I write it in this story where Sery can revive Lucas and the pets in the Nursery Dungeon which is a big sin. I did not realize about this before but now that I know, I cannot continue writing this story. I have trouble keeping myself calm since last Friday and now that I know my mistake, I cannot continue writing this. This is really my fault. I am disappointing everyone now and I hope everyone can forgive me. I don't think I will stop becoming an author but I will not write anything related to this kind of story. System story is too risky because the system is too powerful. I already have an idea on what I can write but I will need to settle the problem with this novel first. The contract and everything :( I am deeply sorry and apologize for everything.
I understand your situation but i was wondering if you would give this novel to Another person. since you cant write it they can. All you have to do is give your ideas and thoughts on it and then leave everything to him because i do not want to see this novel end
RoadBlock92:I am sorry again. I make this announcement in a rush. After deeper research for the past few hours, I finally found my answer. I don't think I can continue this novel. I should have done a more detail check before I write a novel. This is my mistake and I admit it. As a Muslim, I cannot write anything that is not permissible in Islam such as Magic [Upon deeper reading, Superpowers is ok]. I also cannot write something that shows something that only Allah S.W.T can do like reviving the dead but I write it in this story where Sery can revive Lucas and the pets in the Nursery Dungeon which is a big sin. I did not realize about this before but now that I know, I cannot continue writing this story. I have trouble keeping myself calm since last Friday and now that I know my mistake, I cannot continue writing this. This is really my fault. I am disappointing everyone now and I hope everyone can forgive me. I don't think I will stop becoming an author but I will not write anything related to this kind of story. System story is too risky because the system is too powerful. I already have an idea on what I can write but I will need to settle the problem with this novel first. The contract and everything :( I am deeply sorry and apologize for everything.