Review Detail of Henry_Hyren in For the Betterment of the World

The story's eye-catching and most of all, thrilling. The flow is not too slow, and also not too fast. Just the right speed for the readers to enjoy. It's slightly difficult to predict how the plot is going to be because there's only a few chapters, but I see that there's definitely some plots within plots, and with more plots. I'm looking forward for more updates. To improve the novel more, I think that adding commas in between the long and tricky sentences would be a good idea so that the readers could understand more.