Item: Retired Player's Devotion
Rating: 4.8
Author: Shionokami

ShionokamiLv14yr

2020-09-19 20:57

Nice story you got here Author, it's actually the first time I read something like this and it's really well done, great job you did here I will be coming back for more!

Retired Player's Devotion

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