Review Detail of SaeedKH in ..................b

Dude, you better find an editor. Lol😂. Also i liked the starting point of the story and the pesonality of the MC, But you urgently need someone that has at least studied english course for 6 months. I realy liked your writing but u have alot of spelling mistakes, and u need to better organize ur writing. 😁😔✍️👍