Review Detail of Hua_Li_An in 7 Not-so-deadly sins

"7 Not-so-deadly sins" is an exciting action and crime (sin) novel with a unique plot. However, since I liked the concept quite well, I will give an honest review. Points to improve on: - It's confusing. First off, the main characters are portrayed with names from the actual seven deadly sins. Imagine a person named, "Gluttony". Would you immediately imagine him/her as a guy/girl? The first chapter was especially confusing because very little had been given about the characters' appearances. - Naming your characters as the sins is an ingenious move, but it's hard to follow up. From the start, the actions and words of each of the sins must coincide with their name. For one thing, I felt no pride from Pride, and felt no lust from Lust. It was also hinted that Sloth was the one doing some things and shouting for help? It's just my opinion, but characterization needs more improvement, especially with a concept like this. - It was too fast paced. Rather, the actions were conveyed in a manner that didn't make much sense. If the author wanted the readers to like the characters, then that would be a problem, because all I saw was chaos and confusion and little character descriptions. Points I liked: - It is definitely a unique story! I already get the kind of vibe the author wanted in writing this, but sadly, the writing of it still needs improvement. To be frank, if this was more polished, I would easily imagine it as a Netflix series or so. Unfortunately, it needs more work. To conclude, it's a really interesting read with satisfying quality. The concept the author chose was a hard one to live up to and that's why I might have been too harsh in my criticisms. But, by all means, it is a great story. Pick it up and read it now!