Interesting story, author 😊 I found your sentences well-written and I like your way of describing. You use metaphors beautifully. There are a few grammatical errors and common nouns in uppercase but they can be easily overlooked by the engrossed reader. I'm sure your story will be perfect with just a few tweaking here and there. Your story has good potential. Keep up the good work and hang in there, author! 😊
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