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_AiRen_Lv104yr
2020-11-05 23:32

The novel is an amazing read! With a possessive ML yearning for only FL that's something you find in most other works but no doubt this novel stands out more! An intricately designed world background with interlinking relationships pertaining to romance, humour, obsession and further more love and adoration. The plot construction is free flowing not forced and clearly accentuates with charm found in good quality work! Good job author!

Love or Obsession?

IrisSky
4.8
213 Chs

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IrisSky
IrisSkyAuthor

Thank you!

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Shiny_Star5683
Shiny_Star5683Lv13

Sorry, I just saw that I didn't give the review. From the synopsis onwards, I was full of curiousity. And still now I m curious about how the main characters life change with the coming of my most favorite character of the book (I won't tell the name). You might feel that it's a normal love story but that's bcuz the author has very well played with the words to confuse the reader but if you try to read it. I m sure you will get so engrossed in the storyline and would want more and more. I can't help myself I want to read more and more. I know the author is new but the story is worth it. [img=recommend]

4yr

AuHNG
AuHNGLv4

Disclaimer: I only write negative reviews, because I think it's not helpful to write what went well. The stars will reflect my opinion on the novel. Advice; flesh out the companies a bit more. It's just generic company here, and somehow all the people in the story are successful. Download gram marly to catch minor grammar or punctuation errors. You have a lot of those. I think the romance is too fast paced. Remember that while we feel initial butterflies, what makes us love someone are little things like how they are focused on something, their unique quirks and their likes. For now, all I get from the romance is: Alexander finds Eve hot. Eve becomes dumb in the presence of Alexander. Oliver likes Clara. Clara is innocent bird that is getting abused. I think it'll be better if you made the love a lot more meaningful. I won't say that there aren't cute moments that do show love, but as of right now, I think the love could be a lot deeper. For example, there's this novel called When The Butterflies Came, that I loved. The leads fall in love because they have fun times together. Quality time- that and working together and helping each other, are two of the main qualities for a successful relationship. (along with trust and honesty). The villains (I'm assuming) are neither pitifully evil nor good. I can't say I hate or dislike them and that's ok. But a good villain needs to be hated a lot, or sympathized a lot. Morally grey characters are good, but not morally boring characters. That and as of now, I thought the plot would be more intriguing. Will write a better review if you can address these concerns. The beginning had a lot of potential, but the drama of this novel is subpar to some of the telenovelas and dramas I have watched. Develop the drama of this novel a bit more. Had a lot of potential which is why I read to chapter 30. But this novel needs work.

4yr
BedheadBookworm
BedheadBookwormLv15

Enjoyed binge reading this story… liked all the characters — even the evil ones — and watching the friend groups develop and strengthen. Good book!

3yr
Jo_J
Jo_JLv13

Great "catchy" title! I think there is a very thin line between the two ;) Interesting storyline and expressive characters! Well done! All the best with the story!

4yr
moonmato
moonmatoLv1

The plot left me wanting more and more. The synopsis caught my eyes at first and now it's definitely going to be in my library! The interesting plot and characterization are the strong points in this book. Keep up the good work!

4yr
Jyojiko
JyojikoLv11

Love? Obsession? between friendships. When do they cross the line in between? Let this author bring you to a beautifully written story that will have you waiting for the next updates!

4yr
nessiaart
nessiaartLv2

Can I just say your book is literal heaven?! I love how you hooked me in the beginning and I love your writing style. I could really feel the emotion of your characters and all of this in only chapter one. Please continue to update I'm looking forward to more lovely chapters from you.

4yr
XtenX
XtenXLv2

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Jo_J
Jo_JLv13

Good romance! The storyline is interesting and the characters are expressive! Reading is easy and fun. No grammatical or stylistic mistakes. Well done!

4yr
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