Review Detail of Bloodthirsty09 in Football Lord

Author I like how your story is going ryt now but still I would like to mention some things:- 1. First about the system, do not make the system spoon feed the skills to the mc, we should be able to see him rise through his own hardwork the system should be there only as a support. Make him lose if you have to, but make sure he has genuine skills and is not winning because he has the system. 2. You have picked up football for your sports novel and you have a great advantage because of this, there is no other football based sports novel on this site. 3. As you have just started you should increase your chapter release rate as it helps to attract readers to the novel. As you know in the beginning the pace is slow so more chapters always help. 4. Also don't make the games too long, don't stretch them for too many chapters, just focus on the important parts. Keep your story's pace a bit fast and give the MC some good friends both girls and boys. Well that's about it. Good luck author and keep writing more chapters. I