Review Detail of MintyMintyMilkTea in Holy World

[Not too many spoilers, but I put the tag just in case since I comment on things that happen later in the story] Interesting story and magic system! The first two chapters act as a prologue to set up the world and then the story moves quickly from there. The MC is introduced well, although a bit similar to others in this genre. It's a little early to judge the secondary characters. Overall the writing/grammar is good but could use a little cleaning. A few sentences are difficult to read and could be rephrased. I appreciate the creative use of [brackets] to show what should be italicized inner monologue. Webnovel needs to allow italics. I can sense the author has put a lot of thought into the magic system of this world and is slowly introducing parts of it. The mystery behind the system in the MC's head is also intriguing. Looking forward to more!