Review Detail of xiaohai_23 in Holy World

The first chapters introduce the world, and they are surprisingly enough to understand it! I'm not into novels where you have a system and levels, I can't quite grasp them, but this time it's rather clear. Then, the MC is introduced. In a single scene, you understand what his purpose is and where does he come from, very well-written! I'm surely going to read forward, and I'll update my review when I have a more precise opinion. The only advice I can give to the author is to check the grammar, especially the tense of the verbs (sometimes the author passes from past to present and then back to past), but it doesn't impact the reading too much. I haven't seen typos or anything, so I guess the author carefully edits his chapters.