Review Detail of Joel_West in Holy World

Given that it's one of your first writing attempts as youve stated, I am madly impressed. You have the vocabulary and the imagination, if you just clean up a bit of the syntax you'll be a great writer. This particular novel has a fascinating world backstory and the main 2 of Andrew and Aisha are exactly what youd hope for, likeable, with their own personalities and ideas. I am truly looking forward to where this goes, especially as the prose continues to make marked improvements over the course of the chapters.