The story is interesting because its different from the usual plots that I read before. Though I think that I would still like Xiao Ying to have a physical body inside the story later on (just wishful thinkingđ). There are minimal grammatical errors and spelling mistakes but that can be easily corrected. Overall the sentences are well-writte and rich in details. Good job!
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