Review Detail of Just_ForFun in Stuffed into Potter

ok officially this fan fiction is ****ed first narssisa you absolutely destroyed her image you did't have portray her as a free for all because for the plot she could have been abused and would have been grateful if you saved her , even thought death eaters rape ,torture and kill they do it to their enimes and muggles she is a pure blood and lucies has a reputation so he would not others to use his wife except the dark lord . so that chapter was absolute not necessary you could have just said she was abused and tortured . next dumbledoor you could just ho to another country and find some some one attempt to remove his binding and you couuld **** him over or totally go to another . we understand that you want him to face some difficulties but you are just making him stupid , do you seriously think no one would want to kill sriues that was not even logical .