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Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Shadow Lord Reborn

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TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalLv23yrTaintedMetal

A good read. Jumps into the story immediately but there is enough showing of the characters and the atmosphere. The story takes its times to build up events and sometimes tension. I do wish I could see more of the world actually, considering this is fantasy afterall. My criticism is part with the RPG elements. I understand that RPG elements such as ranking up and skills need to be shown to show that this is an RPG, but I think it's best it doesn't always have to be shown. There's also the censorship of swear words. I understand that the author has already set a rating but I personally felt off reading censored words. Maybe best take away the censored swear words completely if the rating is still parental guidance. So far so good. Keep on writing!

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Shadow Lord Reborn

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Thank you for the awesome review much appreciated. And you right about the world view being slow the first couple of chapters but after the fourth chapter that issue changes completely to become a whole new world.