A good read. Jumps into the story immediately but there is enough showing of the characters and the atmosphere. The story takes its times to build up events and sometimes tension. I do wish I could see more of the world actually, considering this is fantasy afterall. My criticism is part with the RPG elements. I understand that RPG elements such as ranking up and skills need to be shown to show that this is an RPG, but I think it's best it doesn't always have to be shown. There's also the censorship of swear words. I understand that the author has already set a rating but I personally felt off reading censored words. Maybe best take away the censored swear words completely if the rating is still parental guidance. So far so good. Keep on writing!
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