English is your second language ? Wow, I would have never thought so when I read your work. Quite impressive if I may add. But aside from that, I read the whole story. Really captivating and realistic. Took me a while though to realize that the modern world and historical world was mixed, but overall no big complaints on anything. In terms of punctuation, I don’t see anything except maybe missing commas that should go in between compound sentences. That’s the only punctuation error I see, really. I definitely will place this is my library to read later. Keep it up author ! (*´∀`*)
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