Review Detail of elkalot in Legends of Iradith

Hello! Okay so I'm literally writing this review so that I can say a bit about this novel for anyone interested. I spent a whole year planning this! So yes, this is completely planned out and ready for me to type! This is my first novel so there are some coherency issues, but I just need to improve that by writing more! It would also help if you guys point out where I'm messing up, so if you could leave feedback, it would be much appreciated :). I hope you enjoy this short novel if you do decide to read this, but if not, that's okay too! Have a wonderful day and I hope you find the read you are looking for~ Love, Ella x