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2020-09-29 06:09

I'm honestly just happy that there's something African related on here. Like oh my gosh, this story is great and I love how the culture is expressed here. I saw some grammar mistakes but we're all human. I love the story and I can't wait for me, keep up the good work author!

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Thanks, this means a lot❤️

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Wow, I was so looking forward to the chapters ehn🙈 got so many things I want to say oh😅,the chapters were Soo good. I can already see it Dili and Rica will make a great couple, I just loved the way he teased her ehn it was fun to read oh and like how he's able to show her how he feels about how how he shows his love ,care attention for her even noticing the slightest things 🤧 and that note was actually disappointing wanted to see her wake up and the first thing she sees it's his face but unlucky something came up. And my greatest surprise was when her mom was acting all goody two shoes that woman is nothing but a bitch( no offense) and finally gotten the reason so if our Dili was not the one marring Rica now and the person is bad this woman will still let her daughter marry that person 😠. My baby is hiding her trophy (Marks) not knowing that Dili loves every inch of her, and wow Dili's mom made it too I was having a bad feeling about her leaving the hospital 😰,and I love the confidence of Dili loved when he took permission to her room God my heart was in my stomach ( I taught her father will disagree 😳) but was not expecting anything from her mom ( that woman cares only for the money) ,when they went up I was feeling (wow never taught it would be this simple and the distance and silence was killing me I was feeling like I was there with them 😂😂).And when he told her of his family company I was here helping her to jump for joy💃💃 then I saw the reason why the alliance was fixed ( stupid parents 🤦‍♀️) . And my heart is still beating non stop for his mom can't wait for more update and prays nothing happens to her😞. Haha🙆‍♀️ I didn't know when I wrote like this oh I was so excited from reading this book 😂, I usually don't write reviews but your book tempted me to write it🙈. please waiting for more chapters 😌

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