Dear Author, You already published many chapters and have great views. Why you don't have reviews?? I agree with my previous speaker. You're doing great job! I encourage you to work on the clarity of characters and please, add some action. Even "50 shades of grey" besides spicy *** scenes has a lot of action... All the best!
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LIKEyu_tanit:Thank you for the constructive critic and I will try to improve my work.
yu_tanit:Thank you for the constructive critic and I will try to improve my work.