Review Detail of Jo_J in His Introvert Wife

First of all - all of us are here to learn and improve our skills! From the beginning of the story I can see that you have a concept. That's a big part of success! The cover page is original. The title s catchy. This kind od stories is completely not my cup of tea.. but I will try to be objective... and I'm sure you will find an auditor to read your book, but you have the opportunity to make it even better. No matter what you write about, it is important that the story has what is most important - the topic (it does not have to be a unique problem that has never been discussed by anyone before), credibility, hero, settings, emotions and the correct language, style, and workshop. You're doing very well!... but there is no drama or real action, the characters lack some hint of spices, are not very expressive (for my taste)... think about it. I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas!