Review Detail of AvatarLOK2 in Harry Lightbolt: Forgotten Genius

Item: Harry Lightbolt: Forgotten Genius
Rating: 2.6

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AvatarLOK2Lv33yrAvatarLOK2

It was ok and all I guess. Some things didn't make sense like how he escaped. If u had made him escape in a different manner that was more plausible then I'd be cool.

Harry Lightbolt: Forgotten Genius

EdgyEdgelord101

Liked it!

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EdgyEdgelord101AuthorEdgyEdgelord101

He was invisible and nobody was paying attention to him in the first place, I think it makes sense, but there does need to be more character and plot development.

3yr