Review Detail of GeneralAldrnari in King of Seven Realms
Review detail
A well written crack fic where the mc paths of strenght will have no trouble which reduces the quality of the story basing on whats going on. A liqiye wannabe, has a mentality of a child majority of the story if theres a girl with a pussy. Your typical gary stu Op Mc fic that is well written but the route and journey of the story is trash, your typical story here in webnovel. For those people who wanted stories that have interesting plot where every other chapter doesnt have ***, catching girls like pokemon, tension. This is not for you. Well if you have Op fetish and "getting girls left and right" trait then this is for you, written very well but the story itself is crap. Conclusion: 90% Him messing around and grab chicks that are irrelevant and 10% journey, adventures, serious moments(which only happens in the early chapter, in the later chapter around 60-present, it derailed and turned into your typical WEBNOVEL shiet fic) Just my opinion and perspective.
King of Seven Realms
meatball_san
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No problem, it is an entertaining story that made me read till the end. It just the way your Main Character Acts/Talks is what made the story pale for me. The way you vision the world is wonderful, it really made me imagine the setting in every word on how you describe the place, situation. It's just, once again for me your MC killed the story. Well everything is his POV and how he thinks, and all i see is him talking about Loli girls, Fahcking woman etc. I cant feel his ambitions, his goals, Motivations. It Made the story bland when you make your character strong enough that all chapter there is, is him visiting new realm and making all girls love him in just a few minutes by just fooling around making the substances of some of his harem character bland as your nhentai woman. lm still gonna read though, i know its not easy to write stories so i admire authors who shape their own world in their own way using words and imagination and this ones entertaining enough for me.
meatball_san:Thank you very much for your input.