🚫WARNING!!🚫 I have read to chapter 88. The story became a mess when the author decided to mess with possible time travel. Apparently the MC went back to the past and had a relationship with the Ancestral God. The MC of the present obviously doesn't know about this. Worse, a childhood friend of the MC in his first life apparently reincarnated in Emperor Domination as an ancient ming and then appeared in the world of ATG in the ancient era. She became the MC's 'weakness' The MC stopped trying to be strong because 'that way he enjoys fights more'. He became arrogant (typical xianxia protagonist) and only thinks about fu©king. In this story Yun Che is becoming strong without all the inheritances of the original work and the MC only thinks that it is 'weird', when in reality it is possible that Yun Che is the reincarnation of a demon. There was a chapter where he clearly sensed killing intent coming from Yun Che and what he said was "I must have imagined it." Anyway, don't be fooled by all the 5-star reviews. (Google translate)
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I'll be short' First, it was never said that he went in the past. MC himself said that it is impossible since he can only live in present. Second, Did I ever said that his childhood friend was born as AM in ED? Third, he is already fking OP! He needs to enjoy his life when one way or the other! Fourth, bruh... he is like the strongest being in ATG currently and you expect him not to be arrogant? Though the reason for it is also explained. Fifth, are you one of the YC haters? That makes sense then, but sorry, I am not. and that "I must have imagined it." yah, I fcked up there. not need to hide. Anyway, thanks for reading and giving your review.
Hello ... You will notice that I only speak of possibilities and use the term 'apparently', since I have not read the whole story and cannot confirm anything. * At various times in history you have implied that the MC did something on another timeline, indicating that he did interfere with time. * As for the ancient ming thing, sorry, I said that because I don't know if she's a dark cultivator or something else, but that doesn't change the fact that she actually reincarnated in ED. I don't like other reincarnates from the same world as the MC. * I'm not a YC hater, if I was I wouldn't have read the story up to this point because in your fanfic YC still has several of its treasures and inheritances, which seems fine to me. What I mean is that YC continues to become the same or stronger than in the cannon (Wang Li has kept two seeds of the Evil God) and Wang Li knowing that there is something strange in him has remained without doing anything. * If you are going to make your character arrogant, do it in an original way, do not copy the typical Chinese protagonist. And please don't make the MC look like Li Qiye, because Li Qiye's arrogance is backed by his strength and his plans, which Wang Li lacks a lot. Not to mention the Dao Heart, which Li Qiye has cultivated for millions of years and Wang Li at the moment cannot be compared to it. And finally, I did this review because many only focus on the harem of the MC and not on the development of the characters or the plot. This is my personal opinion and I know that it may be wrong for others. 👍Thank you for your effort with the novel, and for responding to this review.👍 (Google translate)
meatball_san:I'll be short' First, it was never said that he went in the past. MC himself said that it is impossible since he can only live in present. Second, Did I ever said that his childhood friend was born as AM in ED? Third, he is already fking OP! He needs to enjoy his life when one way or the other! Fourth, bruh... he is like the strongest being in ATG currently and you expect him not to be arrogant? Though the reason for it is also explained. Fifth, are you one of the YC haters? That makes sense then, but sorry, I am not. and that "I must have imagined it." yah, I fcked up there. not need to hide. Anyway, thanks for reading and giving your review.
Sorry, the name is Wang Lei.
Izanmi:Hello ... You will notice that I only speak of possibilities and use the term 'apparently', since I have not read the whole story and cannot confirm anything. * At various times in history you have implied that the MC did something on another timeline, indicating that he did interfere with time. * As for the ancient ming thing, sorry, I said that because I don't know if she's a dark cultivator or something else, but that doesn't change the fact that she actually reincarnated in ED. I don't like other reincarnates from the same world as the MC. * I'm not a YC hater, if I was I wouldn't have read the story up to this point because in your fanfic YC still has several of its treasures and inheritances, which seems fine to me. What I mean is that YC continues to become the same or stronger than in the cannon (Wang Li has kept two seeds of the Evil God) and Wang Li knowing that there is something strange in him has remained without doing anything. * If you are going to make your character arrogant, do it in an original way, do not copy the typical Chinese protagonist. And please don't make the MC look like Li Qiye, because Li Qiye's arrogance is backed by his strength and his plans, which Wang Li lacks a lot. Not to mention the Dao Heart, which Li Qiye has cultivated for millions of years and Wang Li at the moment cannot be compared to it. And finally, I did this review because many only focus on the harem of the MC and not on the development of the characters or the plot. This is my personal opinion and I know that it may be wrong for others. 👍Thank you for your effort with the novel, and for responding to this review.👍 (Google translate)
Nah, I really appreciate the review since many have not given me one on which I can improve it. Much Appreciated. Take this!
Izanmi:Hello ... You will notice that I only speak of possibilities and use the term 'apparently', since I have not read the whole story and cannot confirm anything. * At various times in history you have implied that the MC did something on another timeline, indicating that he did interfere with time. * As for the ancient ming thing, sorry, I said that because I don't know if she's a dark cultivator or something else, but that doesn't change the fact that she actually reincarnated in ED. I don't like other reincarnates from the same world as the MC. * I'm not a YC hater, if I was I wouldn't have read the story up to this point because in your fanfic YC still has several of its treasures and inheritances, which seems fine to me. What I mean is that YC continues to become the same or stronger than in the cannon (Wang Li has kept two seeds of the Evil God) and Wang Li knowing that there is something strange in him has remained without doing anything. * If you are going to make your character arrogant, do it in an original way, do not copy the typical Chinese protagonist. And please don't make the MC look like Li Qiye, because Li Qiye's arrogance is backed by his strength and his plans, which Wang Li lacks a lot. Not to mention the Dao Heart, which Li Qiye has cultivated for millions of years and Wang Li at the moment cannot be compared to it. And finally, I did this review because many only focus on the harem of the MC and not on the development of the characters or the plot. This is my personal opinion and I know that it may be wrong for others. 👍Thank you for your effort with the novel, and for responding to this review.👍 (Google translate)
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meatball_san:Nah, I really appreciate the review since many have not given me one on which I can improve it. Much Appreciated. Take this!image
¿salsa? ¿y por cierto dejaras caer esta novela?
meatball_san:Nah, I really appreciate the review since many have not given me one on which I can improve it. Much Appreciated. Take this!image
