Review Detail of JKaiya in The Legend of The Tamer
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Honestly speaking, author you need to redo your synopsis because its really bad. It doesnt even tell you what the story will actually be about. If I wasnt bored out of my mind just clicking random books that I might like soley based on the title, I wouldnt have even tried this if I hadnt read the other ones in the newbie power rankings I interested in. Plus I only tried this because of the word Tamer in the title and lack of books. As for the actual review, this one was difficult for me as it wasnt like BAD but it was really hard to get into the story. This is because of the first chapter, it felt like it couldve been way better for a starting chapter. Unlike some of the other books I tried that had like actual flaws I could easily flame, this is more to do with your current writing style, which isnt that surprising since I saw u put that this your first book. Only way for that to get better is to read and write a lot more. Because of these 2 things I think are the reason why no1 reads or more so vote this novel. Im also guessing that u review swapped as every1 elses ratings are practically 5 stars while theres like no veiws. I dont like those types of people but whatever, compared to spam and alt accs its way better. The story starts off with MC transmigrating into a hopeless tamer who had died trying to tame monkeys. His parents are legendary talents but not in taming. MC coming from a taming family felt discrace so decided to become a tamer forcefully even though his talent at it is trash. He also has a sister. I only read 3 chaps before I dropped, but the novel's content/style was way too consistent making it dull. With it continuing for 3 chaps I gave up. Again this cant really be fixed without reading good books u like and analyzing what they do and writing more. Its different for every1 but I improved by making a new story and dropping my old one every few dozen chaps to fx my past mistakes and try something else, not the story, but the way I write. Yes my profile only has 3 novels, but I wrote some on other accs while for now Im just stockpiling and also planning for amazon. U just gotta self analayze and try to see what you are doing wrong / right. Review swaps will tell u jack and only r a film that inflate each others egos. Also if u delete me Ill be back as I hate those authors :)
The Legend of The Tamer
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Hi JKaiya.. I don't know you nor have I read your books so I can't judge you or anything, but I've never swapped reviews.. nor have I deleted any.. the people who have reviewed my novels probably did so as they saw I barely had any reviews and had no way to attract many readers at all. Thanks for pointing things out, I know myself and I admit English isn't my first language, nor do I have any background in writing and only did so out of enjoyment. I'm working hard to learn and better my writing. Also.. I don't think I've written that the MC had a sister.. as for the synopsis part... I do have plans to make a better one as I did edit some of my earlier chapters.. but as I said.. Writing isn't my strongest suit.. so its hard for me to make a longer and better synopsis.. enough to actually entice people instead of shooing them away.. Anyways thanks for the review..
JKaiya:oops I thought it was 17k views not 70k, so it might not actually be review swaps. But th again I wouldnt be surprised if author deletes as lots of people abuse
Also I understand your animosity with review swaps and alt accounts as there are a lot who do so.. but there is an easy way to see if a person really did swap reviews.. just look at the reviewers profile, if he or she has a work on the profile and you see the other persons review on the work then that's probably a review swap.. as for alt accounts.. just look at when the account was made.. Please don't do this sort of thing where you review someone's novel without properly making sure about your review content.. I saw your other reviews and a lot of them have you replying to your review while saying something like.. ooops I forgot its not this novel or its this number of views instead of that.. another one was about the chapter count.. Anyways.. as I said.. I hope you succeed in whatever you want to do with your life.. I don't know if you experienced abuse from other authors, but I hope you find something worthwhile in you life.. I only write because I have time and I enjoy it.. I'm happy when people comment.. and some are even kind enough to review my work just to boost me up.. At the least you're not one of those people who just rate too low with no valid explanation why... I also understand that there are a lot of people out there who delete reviews because of valid reasons, and there are also others who delete just because they don't want to lower their rating.. but there are also a lot of trolls who review without a valid reason.. you have to understand that one negative review can damage a person's rating by a larger margin.. so if a troll.. not one who actually critiqued your book for stupid reasons like I don't like this because its romance.. or I don't like this because its a harem.. and that's after reading the tags.. and they put 1 one star or if its possible.. half a star.. then I think its valid for the author to delete that review.. otherwise every author would just create unlimited amounts of alt accounts to pull down a books rating to oblivion.. Anyways, I hope you have a nice day ahead of you. Try and feel the air and appreciate nature.. too much hate and anger is bad for your health :)