Review Detail of jullaw in The Supreme Sage
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I think this novel has more than it shows, it only requires a little more clarity at some points and more stylish way of narrating. But it's already good and affable.
The Supreme Sage
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Thanks. As you may have realised, I'm not that great at english even though it is my first language. I mean I used to get 60% on english every year without fail, while my other subjects were in the 90s. So I doubt I can improve the stylishness of the writing, but I can improve upon clarity and storytelling. Thanks!