Review Detail of Bainas in A Fantastic Journey

I liked it better with the first version but you have killed your story now. Your writing quality is is not bad 3 star Stability now with only 1 chapter and nothing new released a 1 Star Development with so little gives only 1 Star A pity that you have not writen a new story but have changed to much so the character is only 1 Star DXD is a established World so for this 3 Star