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Adam_A
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LIKETbh i was wondering the same thing, would you like to see a harem, romance or cold mc that doesn't need girls to distract him.
Nikhil_Chand:this is cultivation and dungeon novel so will this be harem?
Just a suggestion if you want to make harem: independent girls, MC helps them but arent over dependent on him. Many times it is seen that girl is stronger than MC, helps MC then MC becomes powerful in return helps the girl and eventually moves on to other place where the girl is forgotten. Girls should be relevant even if their arc is over, they are proficient in something like business/army/scheming/administration/have their own guild etc etc so they dont become burden to MC and can do their own work if ever MC has to travel and leave them behind. Unique personalities. They travel with MC most of the time or they are away from each other for short durations only not hundreds of chapters, they shouldnt fall for MC at first sight or just once MC helped or if MC ignored them and they gain interest: these are all cliches, sufficient development of feelings. Harem shouldnt drag the main storyline but support it If you can take care of these simple things and have a harem of 3-5 i dont see a problem. Idk if you can maintain a cold ruthless MC personality and justify it. Instead make MC practical, who thinks before he acts, his personality grows from experiences, has a good scheming mind to survive in outside world, does what he thinks is right and not what society thinks is right, ruthless to enemy, kind to his friends and loved ones, knows when to back down and not overly arrogant, face slapping
Adam_A:Tbh i was wondering the same thing, would you like to see a harem, romance or cold mc that doesn't need girls to distract him.
Adam_A:Tbh i was wondering the same thing, would you like to see a harem, romance or cold mc that doesn't need girls to distract him.
you are right mostly but because of those cliche romance and harem I hate harem and romance so I might drop it if it gets too cliche and yeah I hate romance now(like currently)
Nikhil_Chand: Just a suggestion if you want to make harem: independent girls, MC helps them but arent over dependent on him. Many times it is seen that girl is stronger than MC, helps MC then MC becomes powerful in return helps the girl and eventually moves on to other place where the girl is forgotten. Girls should be relevant even if their arc is over, they are proficient in something like business/army/scheming/administration/have their own guild etc etc so they dont become burden to MC and can do their own work if ever MC has to travel and leave them behind. Unique personalities. They travel with MC most of the time or they are away from each other for short durations only not hundreds of chapters, they shouldnt fall for MC at first sight or just once MC helped or if MC ignored them and they gain interest: these are all cliches, sufficient development of feelings. Harem shouldnt drag the main storyline but support it If you can take care of these simple things and have a harem of 3-5 i dont see a problem. Idk if you can maintain a cold ruthless MC personality and justify it. Instead make MC practical, who thinks before he acts, his personality grows from experiences, has a good scheming mind to survive in outside world, does what he thinks is right and not what society thinks is right, ruthless to enemy, kind to his friends and loved ones, knows when to back down and not overly arrogant, face slapping