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Review Detail of Lustsifer in Multiverses Traveling: join Main God Dimension as Villain Reincarnator

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This is Indonesian story, but I will make my review with English because I am more accustomed to it now. I made this review after reading untill the end of chapter 4, so take it with some salt! From writing quality is good. Very few mistakes. Just some mistake like: wrong placement of capitalize letters and few grammar mistakes. Story development? As the end of chapter 4, it is quite good. But there is something questionable like: Why did he concluded that having system=traveling to anime world? Character design? The MC is too lustful as the end of chapter 4. I hope he can evolve and toned it down. Update stability? According to the already posted chapter, I can conclude that the release schedule is one or more chapter every day. World background? At the end of chapter 4, that is still vague. But I don't know if the latest chapter is good at world building or not.

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Multiverses Traveling: join Main God Dimension as Villain Reincarnator

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