First things first, the story is quite bad, everything about the story is so forced that it hurts to read, and now you may be wondering, hows the character relationships, developments, and romance? Yeah no, author doesn't understand relationships, they are always worrying and b****ing and being total bimbos, the mc included, it's like the author always wants sympathy every chapter at every moment cause it keeps going back to schnee incident, and then the neo incident, and then the beacon incident, etc. Now on to the neo arc, here are the words that describe it perfectly, what the f***? No seriously, cause neo is weak and going to get dirty touched in an alleyway by low thugs, seriously I mean like come on neo is powerful. Dont get me started about how forced neos relationship is and the meeting between mc, in fact everything about the mc and neo in said arc, doesn't make any sense, it was annoying painful confusing and cringing to read it, the author does not know how relationships work at all and it feels like a 10 yr old fantasy in a diary. And then there is the other love interest, same problems with neo being bimbos acting weak and being annoying, just without a main plotline and only a minor story. Let's focus on the mc a bit, as expected the interactions with people the character development all sucks, same with all the characters but nevertheless the mc doesn't get it any different. Mc doesn't use his brain, his backstory could be better, and most of all for action and story purposes, he doesn't use his semblance which is morphing into creatures and partial body modification, if the author focused his fighting style on his semblance than things would be so much better, there was so much potential and so much to look forward to, his semblance was one of the more interesting ones but no, author go berd a few time, so much he could've done and so much potential for a better story all wasted and into the trash. I've ranted long enough and I'll end it here, afterall it cant get any worse right? Edit: it doesn't get any better
Liked by 15 people
LIKE
agreed, pacing is completely off, all characters feel 1 note and dont have any rhythm or reason, and something that bugs me to no end is how the author doesnt space sentences, so they become unbearably long to read
