Item: My life as BEN (10)TENNYSON
Rating: 3.4
Author: Brian70707

Brian70707Lv154yr

2020-08-23 22:41

Start was great slowly goes down from there. Characters becomes more 1 dimensional with a lack of detail It's more like writer is writing a monologue, I get it you want to give explanations for stuff but not in this manner.( This happened, then we did that then this was the result)

My life as BEN (10)TENNYSON

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