Review Detail of Black_Sage in Awaken Demon Lord Valerian

Demon Lord in the title, im intrested. Evil MC +harem maybe?

Hehe you have no idea. He doesn’t do anything without a justifiable reason and the reason will not be big boobs and a skirt but yes, there will be a harem. I’m working on a mass release so forgive the slow updates.

No worry, i just found it. I ll read it after work, so See ya in the comment section xp

I did read till chapter 7, and scroll down the rest... Reason? *Another bait title that dont show MC personality, Primogen Demon Lord - not really, more like a buffon righteous noble. *Same old forced morality, i was evil, but i dont want to be anymore, so here you go, 7 seals that keep the "bad guy" (the one this novel should be about) in check. *Since its going into family friendly romance, we cant forget about the kids (yay!). How about random thash kid from poor village? Perfect. Oh bad guys want to hurt him, even better. This kind of thing. *From the way MC talks, i guess its gonna be romantic lovers journey, not a demon lord domination tour. *Oh and since he WAS evil, dont forget that he have no Lust now, maybe before his sleep he did, but that was his moee interesting self, not good to show it. *Most fun part of his live is in his past, and we cant read about that, cuz current him palys the rolę of fcking white knight. Why? Dont know.. Well it turned out as a smll rant, but hey, the bigger the hype, the bigger dissapointment. P. S. You did the same thing that turned me off from similiar novel. Abyssal Lord of Magi World (something like that, WMW spin off). 10 billion yo demon, apex predator, ruthless to himself and everyone. 40 chaps in, and MC almost have a metal breakdown cuz him enemies kidnapped some trash kid from his clan, like all demon lords surely do. I had some fun at the start. Hope you will climb the ranking fast :).

You might want to give abyssal lord of magi world another go, it's quite a good story with nice world building quite similar to WMW but has a power system that still feels fresh and well thought out as the others were more elemental focus and this one is more law focused

I know bro, i really REALLY wanted it to be like WMW... its just MC does not feel like a abyss lord. Leylin (i hope i remember that correctly) would eat Ezequiel the same minute he got ancient bloodline. That action with random kid? Who cares... He did such a big commotion just for a random. And what about his clas? How can someone strong grow there? And its kinda annoying that he dont have ancient bloodline, why would his slave have one, oh i mean Brother. I like the story and cultivation system, dont get me wrong, its just that a random Young Master is more evil than 1000000000 yo abyss lord. Did he change a bit?

He actually created a bloodline, if you read further you'll see why he wasn't in a rush to get a bloodline, and I'm actually happy it's not just another repeat of WMW(don't get me wrong I loved it) but we already had that with Wizard World

And trust me when I say he can show his darkside of he wants to, as he put some guys in an eternity of torment he's no saint but won't waste time being evil if it has no benefits

But to be honest I think maybe it's hot really your kind of book that's why you don't like it as if it was your type you would have probably waited so if you didn't enjoy it no need to force yourself to read if

I ll wait for some more chapters and give it another go, still i bet his bloodline is weaker than the ancient one.... 300m giant.. C mon bro, eat that ****er and his hoe (i bet he got that Sister girl or smth). It is even a Harem? That Blue dragon girl is kinda annoying xd hope she wont be the only one.

I don't know if it's a harem, though I hope not, and his bloodline allows him more room for variance, ezequils bloodline only allows him focus on strength, inner force and other laws related to his bloodline, if he tries adding other laws it'll weaken his main laws and also he can't merge any more bloodlines, so while his powerful his ability is not really variable. But zatiel's bloodline gave me some wet dreams 9n future possibilities. But I won't lie to you after reading your comments I don't think this book is for you, so if you don't enjoy it don't feel pressured to continue reading it. I'm saying this because I've done the same thing before I read a book just because others taught it was really good and I won't say it was bad but it was not for me

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